The Will to Battle

Ada Palmer, 2017

bookscience fictionpolitical sf

Quadrant Scores

Time Structure0.26
Pacing0.85
Threat Scale0.51
Protagonist Fate0.59
Conflict Style0.78
Price Type0.81

Structural Analysis

1. Protocol Fiction Mapping (Summer of Protocols)

  • Render a Rule: War is not an accident; it is a highly structured, legally binding protocol entered into by sovereign entities.
  • Rehearse a Failure Mode: The leaders try to protocol-ize the apocalypse, believing they can control the chaos of mass death through sheer intellectual rigor.
  • Reveal a Human Insight: The belief that violence can be civilized through legislation is the ultimate hubris of the ruling class.

2. Actantial Model (A.J. Greimas)

  • Mapping pending standard analysis.

3. Todorov's Equilibrium Model

  • Mapping pending standard analysis.

4. The Freytag Pyramid

  • Exposition: Pre-war planning. Climax: First strikes.

5. Propp's Morphology of the Folktale

  • Narratemes: Hero debates.

6. Genette’s Narrative Discourse

  • Order: Protracted, intellectual.

7. The Monomyth / Hero's Journey

  • Subversions: Journey is purely legislative.

8. Dan Harmon's Story Circle

  • The Take: Moral high ground.

9. Save the Cat! Beat Sheet

  • Pacing: Catalyst: Planning the violence.

10. Kishōtenketsu (Four-Act Structure)

  • Applicability: High.

11. The Three-Act Structure

  • Plot Points: PP1: J.E.D.D. accepts role. PP2: Violence starts.

12. The Corporate Vampire Arc (Stakeholders Custom)

  • The Metric: The predicted casualty rates of the coming war.
  • The Audit: Analyzing historical precedents (Homer, the World Wars) to find the 'best' way to fight.
  • The Negotiation: The entire book is a massive, philosophical negotiation about the rules of the violence before the violence occurs.
  • The Autonomy Strip: The leaders realize that once the war begins, they will lose control of the populations they rule.